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pretty well done except for the humor i didnt find this funny and please when you make a joke dont tell are you ready to laugh befor it!!! please. go watch weebl & bob retarded animal babies or i dont know something really fun and take a lesson :) but keep it up im sure you can make somthing fun you already have great graphics!!!
Nothing to it -
besides the very good graphics. It's no fun and kinda plotless... I'm serious! NO HUMOR what so ever. So you can't really use the "punchline"; "Are you ready to laugh?!", that just makes it even dumber to watch...
To be brutally honest...
I think the script needed a lot more work. The animation looks stiff but clean and there weren't any real laughs at all!
I liked some of the designs but the jokes were unbelievably stale. First of all the setting is a rip-off of Seinfeld (the pig looks like George and sheep like Jerry), the spoofing of animal cartoon characters based on superheros isn't really clever OR funny and lastly the last joke about saying something while unaware that the person you're mocking is standing right behind you has to be the most lame and predictable finish you could possibly imagine!
I'm sorry if this sounds harsh, but the script needs a MAJOR overhaul. The voices sound kinda annoying after a minute or so as well. Perhaps you've tried too hard to make them sound like "cartoon" voices.
I hope you make another soon, but please try and think it through a little better next time.
Nice Try...
You did good in some areas and bad in others. The graphics to me looked great but a tad too... simplistic. The animation of this flash was amazing. The sounds were well... repetitive. The voice acting was okay. The humour well... this is your downfall which other people clearly identified. They were sort of mixed. The sheep's phrase was annoying and didn't help the humour at all. Next time go over the script a little more and come up with some funnier jokes. I really hope on your next attempt you should try harder.
Yikes.
Well, your animation was quite good, but the humor was just plain drab. I agree w/ Chaos ont he sheep's one-liner, it wasn't really funny at all. The superhero idea wasn't too bad, bad there should have been much more to it. The best part was the little joke on humans, but the waitress should have done something more random, like whack him with the plate or something, not just dump the food on him. Good luck on your next submission, I think you could do some good toons with some better writing.