Meh, Eh, Well, Yea...
I think it was going in the right direction. I really don't think it had much of a point to it. I mean, it seems like one of those serious flash movies, which I LOVE if they have good animation and a good style. Should have made it longer to give people an idea of what it was about, other than just some crazy "clan" attacking a city. Good luck with the next one I suppose.
Thanks for the advice. The story might be kinda blurry, but keep in mind it is just a prologue. There is more developement to come, but because of the structure of the rest of the story, the details of the prologue don't matter. Hope that clears some things up. :)
Good Storyboard, Improve on Colours
When I watch this flash, it gives a very nice feelings thx to the camera angle. It doesnt look so 2D infact it was quite well planned. Doesnt look like a ordinary work bcoz of that. But still, you have to imrpove on ur drawings and also the colours. Some part really had some volume problems and the colour is not outstanding enough.
there's a part where the assasin guy or something like that stabbed a man. I dont really like that part coz it looks too flat where there isnt much movement for the dead guy or maybe the angle wasnt right . Good effort though
Thanks, I appreciate the CC. I'll keep those things in mind. :)
Wtf?
wtf?I'm confused!What the hell was that? what was going on?
I'm clueless
Always send in your finished product. This is good, but you have major sound issues.
Hmm
I am sure that this will appeal to many NG users. Just not me. I think you draw rather well ijsut don't like the style. The pace was too slow and the story was iincomprehensible. Your sound rocked but disappeared halfway through... That is a major turnoff.