fine
just add...sound effects, a plot people can see and voice... I have no idea what is this flash about but the graphics were fine... somewhat choppy... try highering the frame rate.
Reviews for "Dreams Prologue"
Work on your drawing
After that I have nothing bad to say about this submission besides the drawings take a turn for the worse about halfway in.Perhaps you had to rush?
It gives me hope for newgrounds to find a meaningful submission such as this sent to my inbox for once.This seems truly inpired and sincere for what it lacks in drawing technique.
LordDF responds:
Wow, thanks! I know the drawing is somewhat lacking, I did kinda rush. ¬.¬
nice..
Your FBF is good but you need abit more improvements on the graphic. Tried to add more shadows and make it neater. The backgrounds can be even better if you bring it over to photoshop to improve it.
I think you should tell us more about what's happening or else most pple will give it a 3 and the score will go down. hmm.. i think you didnt stream the music??
LordDF responds:
Thanks for the review. I didn't stream the music because it goes across multiple scenes, and if I did it would stop at the end of the first scene. Or at least as far as I know. Me//sound noob.
Meh, Eh, Well, Yea...
I think it was going in the right direction. I really don't think it had much of a point to it. I mean, it seems like one of those serious flash movies, which I LOVE if they have good animation and a good style. Should have made it longer to give people an idea of what it was about, other than just some crazy "clan" attacking a city. Good luck with the next one I suppose.
LordDF responds:
Thanks for the advice. The story might be kinda blurry, but keep in mind it is just a prologue. There is more developement to come, but because of the structure of the rest of the story, the details of the prologue don't matter. Hope that clears some things up. :)
its ok
not bad! but try making it longer