Ow. That was cool.
Your lighting is amazing but your audio leaves somehting to be desired.
When he was yelling non discript usually difficult to hear/understand things the voice clashed too hard with the music.
The voice needed to be softened down a little, it glared, and was hard on the ears.
The actual dialouge could use a little tiny bit of work, It'd be cool if the story were told by the characters themselves rather than a page which sadly popped onto the screen at a somewhat bad moment (my oppinion).
The best thing about it was the fact that your characters told the story through your incredible animation, and design skill. Emotion is hard to show through flash, and I think you hit the nail on the head with most of the characters.
It was great though, just work on that audio!
By the way, I rarely write reveiws anymore, so I wanted to make this one count, if you reply to this, you rock.