Excellent, but needs some work.
Allow me to point out a few things, from your overall great movie, but need improvement nonetheless.
1) The graphics and style are great! But they need to be a bit more solid and convincing.
2) The voices don't portray enough depth, even though it's better than just reading words. Try to add a little more oomph
3)And finnaly, the sound effects. I particuarly disliked the marching one, as it seemed off sync and not in perportion. Just try to make it sound like about five guys are marching.
Other than that keep up the great work and I look forward to your next subbmision.