Reviews for Whoooop2

[evildemonicsquirrel]

this is the greatest flash

i watched this like 7 times b4 i wrote this review. this SO FUCKIN AWESOME!!!!!!!! u have got to make a series. i was laughing so hard at the "2 dollars! 2 dollars" and the chainsaw thing. i was laughing so hard every time. damn, i just dont kno. im serious u have to make a series.

[goodfella1337]

South Park Re-lived

Pretty funny overall, i thought it was pretty good anyway. I think you should make another one like this (sequal/prequal, whatever) It would be cool.

[demi-sephiroth]

it good

i gave it a five becaes it was werid

[Cyberdevil]

Pr3tty g00d!

lol, the animation was very simple. Could use some shading and details, especially the backgrounds ... but it was also really funny and not too short either. Keep up the great work!

-cd-

[TremcladClock]

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The animation killed it, you really had a winner humour wise, but the bad animation and the abrupt ending really killed it, don't get discouraged if it gets blammed, but heres a few tips for your future animations;

Don't use the default settings for the radial tool to make blood effects, if you must use the radial tool, then mix your own colours.

Spend more time on your characters, make sure they have detail and shading, even if they're supposed to look poorly drawn, you have to put some subtle detail into them.

Use better backgrounds

If you're using the paint tool for shapes like the shit around the one guys face, then outline the shape with a slightly darker shade of that colour, using a thin outline.

Don't make abrupt endings like that, it makes it look like you didn't finish the cartoon.

PsychoMantis093435 responds:

I agree with everything you say. To be quite honest, I didn't spend a lot of time on it. The two things I put on newgrounds so far are not the greatest, but thats only because I only made these for fun. Right now, I'm investing my time in a much better cartoon. I mainly made this and the other one to relieve stress. (I'm working on a Christmas cartoon to show at a family gathering.) The animation backgrounds and everything else are much better in that, but I export them to avi's so the file size is way to big to post here.