Great.
That was really good. The Matrix scene was funny, but perhaps a little overdone. "I can see my house from here" however, saved the scene. Keep this series coming.
Reviews for "The Collective #1"
nice job man
very well made good story well atleast it have 1 kindna funny n u can c the character wote89 u retard looking forward to the next 1
keep it up
Andy-Parker responds:
You know you shouldn't make fun of retards... I'll get back to you when I think of a reason why.
i loved it
that movie rocked
i especially like how u did the matrix scene
u could improve a little on the sound though and then this would be a ten
really really funny
I enjoyed it alot it was a bit like decline of vidio gaming but you make an awsome flash there :) really looking forward 2 the next 1
Andy-Parker responds:
In that case I'll make the sequel just for you. :)
Nice
Well written, you did a lot of work and I can tell. I loved the Matrix references. Keep up the good work!