Reviews for ODST squad

[303]

Umm, Needs Some Fixing...

Ok, Ok, Ok....
Right, im going to be pretty damn decent with you...
The movie its self [Graphics And Style] That was something sweet you put so much effort into it i can see it my self that doesnt need fixing.

Now to SOUND & EFFECTS! OMGWTFBBQ!
SERIOUSLY LOOK AT THE SOUND WHEN YOU RECORDED THE VOICE OVER IT WAS'NT THAT CLEAR!
Effects - E.g Killing the alien!! COME ON MAN JUST A FRIKIN SPOT OF BLOOD!
COME ON THIS IS FANTASY YOU KILL EM AND YOU EXPECT TO SEE BLOOD GO EVERY FRIKIN WHERE!
AND THE EXPLOSION ADD A BING FRIKIN BANG AND SOME BIG ASS EXPLOSION!

This could have been front page[In my view] and also would have made up for the short flash.
I completely reccomend that you fix this up, especially SOUND AND EFFECTS!!!!!!
Who knows probably you can reach front page. 0/0

Im Sorry for screaming at you. D:>

[Kisengue]

Ok, but... 2

Graphics were well done, but it should have been longer. Also, a story of some sort would be nice... and you should either practice voice acting or get some pals to do it for you.

[Spartan4646]

WTH

okay dude look the animation was good but the voices were lame and so was the fact on how bad you made the ODST's act

[Alkador]

Hmm...unfinished

As you have said, it is a test, so I will review this 'test' you have uploaded to Newgrounds. Firstly, one thing I look for for all flash uploaded on NG (no matter what) how completed they are. This movie presents a very powerful introduction with a good use of graphics and style incorporated into it. However, this quality is lost through the incomplete animation you have used later.

You have good potential for future flash but only if you have the effort to complete it. If you had of completed this flash using the basic animation techniques I saw, you may have earned yourself a 6 or a 7, but you really need to work on your work, 'tests' or not.

[PartyArtie92]

wow

you suck, wait until you hit puberty to try this shit again u little midget