sorta good
i liked it but i would have given it an additional star if you had put in more voices, and made them sound like marines. it was like, the ODST guys sounded the same as the grunts, and they were all way too quiet. next time, try changing your voice around, making it sound a little deeper and different for each character, and also be louder.
Ok.
But get someone else to do the voicings You have the typical 13yor voice thats not good for anything record yes. But you got the graphics down good.
Some Ideas for your next flash.
Ok, the animation was good, although the Rocket could've been more convincing, and fly straight, I mean, if you look closely, when the ODST fires the rocket launcher, the rocket curves down almost immedietly, then I see it curve back down onto the grunts, as if the rocket bounced. Oh, and another thing, try to get more people to do this kinda flash with you, so it won't be the same voice over and over. Try to sound more realistic, enthusiastic, and manly if you do this flash again, depending on the mood of the flash. Also, a marine wouldn't say,
"Thank you Mr. Sniper Guy." Maybe a, "Thanks, I owe you one." or something. But nice drawings.
lol
2 grunts is"too many" lol
I loved the animation but didn't like the voicing
one bit. It ruined the whole thing. Could have been better. :(