Reviews for Ricks Shorts 1

[TheUsualSuspect]

It looks like..

You have some talent. If you practice I think you could be really good.

A little longer, and a little more developed, and youre gonna be awesome.

Good job

rz-stick responds:

thanks!! i really appretiate that, u have made my day (i have been very ill today) i will keep going no matter what anybody says, and i have been for a year!!!

[VashKun]

That was a good try

You can tell that you have a good idea how to animate but you need to further improve the story. Even tho it was supposed to be short, there was no plot to it and ended to fast. If you improve this one or make another one try to make it longer and more interesting. But still a great try

rz-stick responds:

thanks, iv'e just learnt how to effectively make stick figures walk, before i could barely make them move. the next short will be better promise!

[CactusEater]

it was good

and i know it was supposed to be a short, but it was still just too.... short. this could be great if you made it longer

rz-stick responds:

ok, will make the next 'short' twice as long ty for the advice

[Jazz-Jackrabbit]

Tried and Tired

If this hadn't been done several thousand times before, this might have gotten a better score. Try something other than the stick figure and the wall flash.

rz-stick responds:

im sorry you can't appretiate stick figures, it was a test, and obviously by the name a short, and it was my first full animation of that kind, p.s STICKS RULE and u know it deep down