Meh. not good, not bad either.
Well, I liked what you were doing with it, but the flash didn't seem to "work" in my opinion. The stick attacking the wall and yellign at it was clever, and I found it enjoyable. I'm not really a fan of "stick shorts", but the fact that there was only 1 stick in the flash actually makes it pretty unique and interesting.
Basically, I didn't care for it, but I'd like to see more.
k, thanks
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Well it was short, but interesting, i saw what seemed to be like a stick character a red guy which was ok, but wouldnt designing a unique characrater of your own be much more better? anyways funny short, it had abut of style with the animating sso nice work, hope to see more in the near future...
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ty and u will! iv'e started work on a new a full length animation :P
Not bad, not bad
The movements of your sticks are a little choppy, so you might consider smoothing those out. Stick animation should be really good since the characters aren't complex to draw. I think you have some good ideas, but it's hard to follow the text, and the sticks have to stop to talk, so try to make it more action and less explanation. I think that this could have been really good if you had a whole group of sticks fighting to get across and avoid the thing at the same time. Just work on it some. I'm looking foward to seeing what you can do with your skills movies that aren't tests. You should check out my stick test movie lol. It got a friggin 3.2! Good work, stick with it.
ty, i am making a new stick animation, with a very original concept!!! nobody would guess what it is but it gives stick fighting a new edge xD, hope you get to see it and ive been working on it for about 5 hours iand i am very pleased with how smooth it is i saw one of your animations and it was odd but cool
Not bad, not bad at all.
This was pretty good dude. I can tell you're new at flash, and this was a pretty decent attempt. Making the sticks talk was a great idea - it keep people more interested. I just didn't like the whole " gay queer thing". I've made some movies where I put gay jokes in the dialogue, and let me tell you something : it's really not worth it. You're bound to get a bad review saying how you insulted gays, which in a sense you did. Personally, I know you were joking and stuff, but it might offend others and could therefore lower your score. So just for future references, stay away from gay jokes. The animation was average, and there wasn't much wrong with the sound. Good job overall man, and stick with it :D
new at flash?!?!?!? ive been animating for a year!!! but ive only started focusing on sticks like that for the past well, 2 days that took me about 3 hours and nobody has said anything about my joke so far, so who cares xD
Not too bad, keep trying
You've got the basics. A bit of sound; a bit of action; some randomness. You need a little bit more story in each episode. I think the animation needs to slow down a little or something.
Some sound effects would be good.
k ty for the advice, bit more sound effects in and some sort of storyline in the next one, thanks for watching