pretty cool, does seem rushed
i read all your explanations and whatnot, but i still liked the beginning animation and your logo is pretty sweet. lacking a bit in plot and character development, the rock song doesn't quite match, maybe something a bit more dramatic so the dialogue takes more center stage. it's funny the guy above me voted 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10, sigh. gave you a 4/5 hope it makes it thru judgement!
Thanks for understanding and voting fairly =).
Your teacher must love you!
I remember seeing this on your site a while back.
Turned out pretty good and an interestin way of putting it.
Well done! =D
I got a excellent as my return comment. Hoorah.
That was cool.
..but personally, I think there would be more conflict between spring and fall.... but that's not really important, is it?
Anyways, great animation. The graphics were clean. The design could have been a little better, it was hard to tell what season each guy was. Maybe if you focused on the theme of each season rather than classical elements it would be clearer.
The sound was pretty good, but the speech was way too quiet. You gotta normalize your audio.
Altogether this was an excellent animation by-far. It stands high above 80% of the stuff here on NG. Keep it up!
Thanks. I actually have to disagree with you on the "hard to recognise" thing. I showed the designs to countless people who picked their names straight away. So far nobody has really had that much of a problem with figuring it out.
To be continued?
You better make a sequel cause I FREAKIN HATE the people that are like "oh it's gonna be continued" and then they never make the second part RRRRRRRR GOD! MAKE THE NEXT PART!!!!!!!!!!!
not bad
not too bad. storyline, kinda similar to this anime i saw but then again practically all story lines are taken. besides that your animation is nicer and smooth. I just watched your older flashes and I do see an improvement.. i enjoyed it. keep up the anticipation