...um...interesting...
...too bad I'm sober...
Reviews for "Mr. Bitch"
Ok
So because you hit him in the nuts, he got a bloody eye? Hmmm...
Ryan
halboski... this animation is.. um, yeah....
hehe.. using the Rocky music was awesome. Also the perspective that the figher was punching at did look prety cool. However dont take this the wrong way but the style did look rather sloppy. i mean, you didnt use mixed gradients, there wasnt a story.. it just lacked major components that would make a more decent movie. but if what im reviewing is the what you were going for, then you did a good job. toodles.. /Flashed_MRG
(ps: that fart sound was nasty)
halboski responds:
Well, I did just throw it together, it was a lean as you go process. I have three movies on NG and I made them within a week of each other. I am (to state the obvious) learning flash. I like your objective and honest opinion. Any tips for learning flash just send them my way.
K
^^Good Points^^
I give you points for effort. Looks like you gave it a good shot. The events were kind of funny. Liked the crotch punching and lightsaber action.
^^Needs improving^^
Drawings could really use a lot of improving. Mostly needs better coloring and some shading perhaps. Also, something in the background and more camera movement would do wonders.
meh....
errhhhh..........?what?