Practise makes perfect :)
Practise makes perfect :)
Practise makes perfect :)
Practise makes perfect :)
A Men
Practise makes perfect :)
Practise makes perfect :)
Practise makes perfect :)
Practise makes perfect :)
A Men
aweful
i agree wiv everything that ajam said except i mean it alot stronger and hope u stop making flash. truly aweful!
I hope you start acting more mature very soon,because you can't even incourage somebody to make flash movies to get better and better.Well,I hope the reviews you leave in the future will be more incouraging for those who make great flash movies and people like you who leave the authur with nasty reviews. Doesn't it say in the rule book of Newgrounds that if your offensive to people,your account should be deleted?I think your truly hateful to others, so I'll just leave it at that.
MONGOFIED COW MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
(___)
( oo )
/------------ \ /
/ ll ll
* ll-----------llMOOO
^^ ^^
Not good but not bad
it was good, the graphics could be better they look a bit pixilated . and on the start scrolling text bit. *turns into english teacher*
has gone on not has went on
intil -> until?
its vodka not vodca
instead of swearing use different words or delete them compltely there not always needed, i.e the bit where you moron is added, that could be taken out and would still be good
but overall a good effort :)
Sorry about that.=)
It's good, but...
1) Your spelling is attrocious, proof read your dialogue using word or a spell checker of some kind.
2) Find a different Star Wars logo to Super Star Wars, see if you can find a screenshot of the opening of x-wing or some such thing, or alternatively draw it yourself
3) Work on your backgrounds a bit more, they looked cheap and shoddy.
4) DO NOT USE GAMER SPEAK! IT IS EVEN MORE NERDY THAN I AM, AND IT PISSES ME OFF IMMENSELY!!!