perhaps maybe you should spend time on this
There was no voice acting . which i wouldnt have a problem with except all the grammer and spelling errors distracted me . i had to figure out what you meant.
Second you used 1337 speak which in a published working is gay especailly if we have to try and read it to figure out plot
orignally created characters would have been nice also thats a BIG 0 for all you 1337 |-|4X0Rs out there making gay films
Spellcheck before you go online.
Just cause I like acting like an arrogant COCK:
Spelling
Cricis = Crisis
intil = until
Siece = Cease
Vodca = Vodka
Poor = pour
Grammar:
has went = has gone
Exclamation, Question Marks - Just don't Use more than one.
Grammar Notes:
There is a space after periods, colons and commas.
++ You Put ++
Special Thanks to:Flashkit(.)com,The Peoples Sprites.....
Your - Yours (i.e. That flash of yours sucked.)
You're - You are (i.e You're not very literate.)
++Correction++
Special Thanks:
Flashkit(.)com, The Peoples Sprites and The Spriters Resource. I don't know who made the Vader Sprites, but if you're watching, I thank you!
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Poor star wars
I didn’t even watch it to the end you know why it was boring I've seen this type of flash 100 times and I didn’t like it the first time. You want some tip stop being lazy and animate something these sprite things are annoying and pointless. Normally this would be the time I say something nice about your video but I cant I just can't
nice try,needs more care though
you need to learn how to spell dude and if your going to curse....do it god damn it.ive seen much better!!!!
Needs more care.
Nice try, but it needs to be executed with much more care and attention. There were spelling and grammar mistakes all over it, and while this isn't a big problem, it does look terrible if every other sentence has some kind of accidental mistake in it. If you're going to swear, just swear, don't waste time with stupid shit like @$$; not only is it not funny, but it also makes you look stupid. Ten out of ten for attainment, but you really need to make more of an effort; you looked like you rushed through this.