A few things...
1. Please remember that the sound effects fpr people when they talk are very annoying. Unless the character is actually talking just use golden silence.
2. Very long discussions. Please sum it up in a couple sentences please.
Now, i am a fan of sprites but not close up to where you see the pixels. Other than that i just didnt like the story line. I dont know where but i think it was taken from some other game. But then again this is only my opinion. I think you could do much much better.