i have a few idea's
first of all have voices next time the story lines good but you need voices not little reading thing second better anime 3 have to have link in the battle 4 not all sameri or how ever you spell it music some action man and make lots of action just not all talking talking ok but alot of it is boring if it's no humor then you need more action to take over the humor just make it better i will be watching
Waaaaay Toooo Loooong!
The intro was way too long and that popping or boinging or whatever that noise is for the characters speeches are sooooo annoying! But it is clear you put good effort into it and the story is not bad at all. Keep it up!
too much talking not enough of anything else...
this was ok but it was too long of an introduction. If you make a sequal make it a little more actiony and less reading.
...err...nothing much,really...
...um,...i cant see anything that would make it sooo awesome...pardon me,but this is pure c**p...did i really miss something...?
...dude...
bleh
gah this was so lame, if your gona make ninja stuff dont use mario, he isnt asain and he is fat, wheres the stealth in that ? he should stick to plumbing or maken pizzas