Reviews for Sida : The Invisible Evil

[FuzzyCub]

deeper than most can fathom

Not an anti-climactic story about an evil man and a vulnerable child, but more about the invisible evil that is prejudice. Not racial prejudice, but personal prejudice. His mother wrongly warned the boy about the crazy man, and the boy translated his mother's fear into rudeness to a harmless old man. The last thing the boy did was sadden the man to tears, and before he could make things right, the man died.

I'm not right on the money, but i hope you can START to understand what the author is talking about.

And what the FUCK does fat-pie have to do with this?

[bvncbvnc]

nice flash

uhmmm nice flash really good ... random question though how would you pronounce ur last name, because I know that if that was arabic it sounded a hell of a lot like welsh, well anywhoo good character design might wanna try to put more detail in the background, shading etc. peace

[obilisk]

very good,

that was very good but you didn't really tell what was happening it is just a series of events you need to make it longer

[ipwashington]

Good work

A well told story, with good animation. I take it that english is your second and arabic is your first language? If that is so, then kudos on the grammar and spelling (and on taking into accound the calander differences). Alot better than many native speakers ^_^. You however used a couple of words in a way, that, while not being wrong just aren't used commonly in that fashion (believe me, I know how tricky it can be getting these things just right in a foriegn language). Namely "shoot the ball" is used mostly in sports such as basketball and is more an action of the hands. Most people would simply say "kick the ball" (though one can still "take a shot" at the net in soccer/football... yeah, confusing). Also "hold his hand" would be better replaced by something like "lift his hand". Holding hands is usually something reciprocal, and is mostly palm to palm. Nitpicky stuff, but I thought you might be interested in that kind of thing. Again, great work.

[Uxorious-Widow]

Pretty emotional

Liked your style, almost brought a tear to my eye. Also liked the fact that you didn't try to add any pointless special effects or humour.