Good for what it was. =)
Very impressive art/animation. Shame it couldn't have been finished, but I'm always glad to see more StarFox in the portal, which there isn't enough of. StarFox 64 is my favourite N64 game, after all.
You did all the voices yourself, I'm assuming? Not bad, I must say. I liked your job with Falco, though others like Andross coulda been a bit better.
I'd gladly help you out with voicing if you made another SF flash, as I'm highly experienced with it, so don't hesitate to call upon me or other members of NG's Voice Acting Club, if you wish.
Regardless, you're quite talented, and I greatly anticipate your next flash.