Genuine.
The graphics aren't mindblowing, the poem is a bit predictable and without too much depth. But for someone, new to flash, to put so much of themselves into a pretty good work like this is more than commendable. Well done.
Reviews for "fear - a poetic flash"
hmmm...
seemed a little goth-esque (lol) but i liked it.
Heh heh, you use a nightlight...
Too bad Daily2oons is finished, they coulda had some fun with this.
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The graphics were bad, and in the name of construction critisizm:
You disobeyed the rules of poetry, first off, rhythm. You need to have a set amount of syllables in each phrase for it to sound right. The line I think I noticed that was "committing suicide". It should just be "suicide" only because there are a certain amount of syllables. Also, you can't go in and out of rhyme. For 1 or maybe 2 lines you rhymed, and then you got out of rhyme. If you do that, it sounds horrible and way too out of place. If you rewrite it and remade the flash to have better graphics and whatnot, it'd be better. So good luck for the next flash. Until then, keep it up.
Coiz responds:
Everything you just said is a lie. Poetry is the art of word play, and nothing more. I write poetry with rhyme, but this particular poem is written in free form. The rhythm in the poem can be found in the pattern with which certain lines were OUT of rhythm.
sorry but
i hate emos, like that other guys review, seriously whats with all the angst, surely ur life cant be that bad, (no worse than mine) so i mean, whatevers bothering u, well, suck it up