so much freaking better it blows my mind
After being ready to insert a shotgun into my mouth after a skittles and bits marathon, you turn things around and finally DO IT RIGHT!
Either someone has shoved a syringe of chemicals into my ass or your writing ( humor ) has done a 180 and improved greatly.
I loved the reader board at the bottom and the lon lon milk segment. The UFO part went on a little long, but you came back and made the rest...please lord don't strike me dead for using this word, but "punchier".