okay
well, im no fan of either DBZ or sticks.... or short animations, but this animation was alright and if you work harder on it, it has the potential to be a cool series.
Reviews for "Black v.s. Red Pt. 1"
Longer and Stronger
It was a good start, but for this type of movie it needs to be longer, have more action (with cool shots), or have some depth to the characters. You picked a good song for a fight, try making the fight fit the song better too.
eh
this was ok for a first animation. the song choice was lame though. yeah, def work on the actual character drawings and make it longer. i know it takes time but itll be worth it.
get some better music
sum41 geesh. and work on the figures, not just their animations and explosions. what the person said befor me was right. put a reason why their fighting right befor the fight. or just show them start fighting instead of cutting in on the action. plus it was so short that it just added to reasons not to bother.
even if you dont change anything else, just make it 3 minuts long. please!
Better than last time
Still, it had little to no point. The style was alright but it needs more action.