Booooooooring
That was the biggest waste of time in my life. Seriously, were the hell was this "great battle"? All I saw was some thicks jumping and diving towards each other. And then eventually one of them dies.. In the most foreseen death, EVER.
And that letter was sooo cliché.
Try MUCH harder.
Though this movie was pants, I believe you have potential. Try making a game version of this. I believe you can learn actionscript off of some free tutorials online.
Wtf?
How the fuck did this get on front page?
Your idea of dodging is taking one still graphic of a guy in a lame pose and motion tweening him over the other guy without actually moving his body at -all-. The idea isnt even verging on originality. Its too slow. Its only saving grace was that you didnt try to colour it aswell, otherwise we'd be faced with a paint-by-numbers peice of crap rather than the ordinary crap it is.
A lot more time and effort needs to be put into future submissions. Less tweening, or if you're going to tween, put some more thought into it and at least do a body as more than one graphic so its not like a tumbling statue.
Inimpressed.
Boring with a big B!
What the hell happened? instantly that other guy shot the one who killed him???? i couldn't read the damn text in the paper so that could be the reason and loading screen...... gimme a break....
meh
at first i read the review before me and though it was a little harsh because there are alot of people who are just mean reviewers, but then i watched it and, seriously, it musta been a slow day in the portal for that submission to make it to frontpage. Ok, time for constructive criticism, the graphics were not good enough to cover up your lack of REAL animation, but real animation i mean, animating the pictures instead of the cheesey draw and tween until camera change, second, with the previous cheese from the cheesey animation, the addition of cheese from the overdone bulletime EXTREMELY slow jumps in the air, and then the same thing again, was just silly... no, dumb, oh and the cheesiest thing of all would be just the plot or lack there of, it was like a gigantic ball of mozzarella, and as in real life, too much cheese is never a good thing, you get all bloated and then backed up, its just not good, so try and keep it out of your movies
Why is this on the frontpage?
This was pretty terrible, only about 5 seconds worth of events occured, practically no sound effects, bland art (but at least they weren't stick figures), no plot and a almost complete lack of color and imagination. The next direction you do NOT want to go in is collaborations, I see that as practically going no where from near stick figure fighting scenes. Be original.