It was ok, i guess
after seeing this though, i bet you could do alot better, I'm not saying that this is really bad, but some parts seemed to be made alot better than others, like when the guy fliped over the other, that didn't look like alot of effort was put into it. I'll vote for it to stay. keep submiting.
Just two things
Great flash--slightly choppy animation--however the camera angles more than made up for it. Very nice work--I love to see flashes that obviously have a lot of effort put in behind it.
As for some tips:
You may want to look into fixing the load bar. For some reason it's stretching out of it's "load box," which may be a caused error had you attempted to alter NG's preloader improperly. The second thing you may want to look into is the volume--which I think was practically maxxed out. Louder music does not equal a better movie. You may want to set it back to default and let the audience decide when they want their ears to bleed. :3
*pokes
Great work!
finally
finally something noeworthy on the portal
wow
good animation this is really good
Good Animation
This was a well done one. Good action and it was quite smooth going. I loved the ending, especially the view from inside the gun. Music was alright though I think another would have suited it better, though I have no specific suggestions myself. Well done.