Even better
Dude this had a lot way better animations and very good intro
Reviews for "PALADIN episode 3"
ahhh much better
I've been waiting a long time to rate it a 10 the first two were okay but this episode gave a full explaination of what was happening and how it came to be
This story...
While I really like what you are trying to do here, I'm not sure that the mythology is devoloped very well. It's too easy for The Paladin to win. He is given a sword, and then he is given armor. There's no questing, no struggling to gain his position and his power, no conflict in his past (except for his uncontrollable infancy) that sets him up for true heroism.
You've got most of the elements of a good hero myth going here: the good vs evil conflict, the influence of the gods, the importance of a mentor. However, it needs to be more personal for the hero. Did the Necromancer kill his father, rape his mother, kidnap his children, harm the priest? What does the Paladin have to gain from all of this.
You are a wonderful artist and you concept is wonderful. I would just like to see this mature into something more complete.
Audio problems.
Good, but the audio needs alot of work. Its very scratchty, during the action, but the talkings fine.
Even better
Your getting dangeriously close to perfection now. I really liked how you made the scene before and when our Paladin goes back to earth.
Still think you're overdoing some of th SFX. A little too much sound on some.