Not too bad
I liked it personally, I have a thing for fantasy stories though.
There was some difficulty about the sound, in the beggining it seemed like the music was the central focus, not the voices.
I think you should definitely keep up with the story, it has great potential.
The choice of music later in the flash was excelent...I commend you on it.
Boring....
Sorry, but theres not much more to say...
The guy with the blond hair, I think he's the bad-boy(but I'm not really sure, 'cause it was too boring, to follow the story), has a banana-head, and I think, that's real embarassing for a bad-boy.
But I can undersrtand why bad-boy-banana-head hates loklair: I hate it too.
More action, more blood, better music (I like the Hans Zimmer part, but it was too short), better humans (no bananas please) and it would be a much better flash.
Pretty good work.
I think the only thing were the spelling and grammar errors. It wouldn't hurt to give your shit a spell check before submitting it. It doesn't help when I have twenty plus spelling and grammatical errors staring me in the face. Otherwise, totally awesome work.
YOU ROCK
hey man u rock keep em coming and u'll be getting my five's
lol
another good effort
quite liking this series still find it too dark at times but I guess it sorta works with it being based slightly on the dark ages, sound still isn't great i think with a few good voice actors or perhaps just a bit more experience working with the sound you'll have something pretty good here