Reviews for Black Knights Episode 2

[DivineJustice]

I like it

I like it but it could be so much better! You gotta work on the dialog alot. Like the messenger dude if he really talked to the king like that he'd be like fucking killed, and the fact that everyone has a badass attitude doesnt work out. Next, the why are you doing this thing was kinda gay you should've just made it short and sweet like "you bastard." And last of all whats up with the whole green energy thing in the episodes why doesnt the black knight guy just use it constantly to defeat his enemies and, if its like a limited energy thing make it show that its hurting him when he uses it, I think you should stray away from the whole super power energy blast and get more envolved in the acutal sword fighting cuz if the black knight is just gunna blast them why give him a fucking sword. Well thats all i got to say im curious to see how your next episode turns out.

[Anger-of-Souls]

Better than your last one

This was no doubt better than the last and I'm glad that you took the few people's (including myself) advice and gave this guy a different sword. The graphics were good in some places but awful in other places. Also I realized that you mispelled 'tomorrow' (you spelled it tomarrow, wtf). Still not much of a plot to speak of though, and still needs A LOT of work.

[Castra]

screw everone else...I like it

just keep doing what your doing
i'm looking forward to chapter 2

(^.^)

[B1gR3dC4t]

Good story, but...

Graphics: It looks ok, but this is poorly animated. Not to mention that with the color scheme you chose and how dark everything is, it was hard to see what is goin on.
Style: The story seems to be the only redeeming quality in this Flash. The dialogue is very cheesy and the text is illegible in some parts. The characters lacked depth, meaning they were all the same and had nothing that made them unique or worth remembering.
Sound: The music selection is great, but it drowned out the other sounds. The sound FX weren't sinced well. The vocals is where the biggest problems occur. Vocals for the most part were too soft, not to mention the facts that everyone sounded the same and had no emotion behind there statements.
Violence: I know something happened by what little sound I was able to hear, but it still doesn't help. The redlines didn't help either, not to mention the fact that the blood effects were greatly degraded. And the green energy effect cheepened this the worst.
Overall: You need to put alot more effort into character design and the balance in the sound department. Good story, but fix it up.

[mello-ix]

this series could develop well...

It's okay, but the major problem that seemed to glare was the voice/subtitle work. Especially the subtitles that were misspelled, quoted incorrectly, and with grammatical flaws. That may be nit-picking, but it was the biggest flaw overall.