I'm usually not this harsh but...
Next time you wanna try writing a joke or two in there?
It's good to see you've seen American Pie 2 but I cant stand unoriginal crap that can't even manage to squeeze a chuckle out of me....
good work on the actual animation. I enjoyed how you drew the chicks but everything else was built around THAT... which made your flash pointless. Maybe MTV will make a series out of it. You should check.
okay here's what i think
go kill yourself
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Wow. I've seen some pretty fucking lame cartoons.. but this one is just mind-numbingly stupid. Your girl must be proud. And by your girl I mean lefty.. cuz there ain't no way in hell you'd ever get laid callin her "dudette".
Meh...
1) Edd and Tord look like crap compared to the dudette.
2) Complete lack of effort in the writing and animation.
3) Not funny
Apparently. the lesbian kiss was placed in there to give people a reason to watch it. Are you that desperate? Don't mean to be an asshole, but when someone shows something like this to get people to view it, it's absolutely pathetic.
couple of things
first of all, the guys were like midgets. it reminded me of leisure suite larry. secondly, notice how the sounds were all generic or copied from cartoons (flinstones running was the big one i noticed)? yeah so did i. third, the humor was a little...hm....dumb. rather silly too. perhaps the guy in red preparing to give her flowers, but the other guy giving her something more kinky...and she accepts it (just one idea). finally, what happened to the chicks' noses at the end? they got long and pointed. seriously man, what's up with that? that's it.