I don't understand...
...it was that short, but still 4MBs. I suppose I'll never understand...
...anyways, good job on this... kinda interesting, and a special ol' school cameo at the end. And I like the Trogdor pic in the credits.
Reviews for "Pikachu's Heart-Break"
TylerLandis responds:
yea, trogdor is like, my hero...
i know 4 mbs is alot, but i cant figure out why its that much. i think its that song...its a huge file...
Its Ok
It's Pretty good. You need to work on backgrounds a little, but it's pretty ok.
TylerLandis responds:
thanks. yea, i know, my backgrounds arent the greatest...
good, now a step up
next, something w/o sprites, ur own character
TylerLandis responds:
i have my own character that i'm thinking about making an animation with, but i cant draw very well, so once i get some decent drawings i'll try one without sprites.
Well . . .
First off, for being your first flash, it was okay. Second of all, I like the whole concept. Dont see much flash like that on NG. Nice to see soemthing new. But! Your not getting away that easy. You do need to improve on many things. Tidy up your speach bubles, tidy up your sprites, etc. Make the flash look clean like it just came out of the shower :D. Then you need better sounds. You can always use Falshkit the site (sorry no links allowed in reviews) for sounds. Trust me it helps. But all in all you did pretty good. I mean I liked it, but other people, dont worry about what they say. They're noobs that have no idea how to work flash and couldnt do better them selves, so whatever. Anyways I liked the ending the best. lol. Just because I think you'll do better in the future I gave you a 5. Hope you'll take the time to respond to this and hope to see some more flash from you :D. 5/5
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! FUN FACT ! My longest review :D ( I think )
TylerLandis responds:
thanks for the reveiw.
ill try flashkit next time, and i'm glad you liked the ending.
my reveiws were odd...it seemed like some poeple hated it and some liked it. my highest was a 9/10 and my lowest was a 0/10....
do you know how to put more sounds in without going over the size limit? cause just that song made it almost over...
thanks again, and i feel priveleged to have your longest reveiw :)
What song is that.
I know it's Children Of Bodom I just don't know what song.
TylerLandis responds:
Needled 24/7