thats was ....
that was good you say it ur first animation and it was a good one to start with u shud make more and the last guy that reviewed this is probably one of those people who hate everything that dosent explode every 5 minutes
Reviews for "The Flower's Dream"
Pretty good.
I liked it, it's something differen't from the rest of the crap that gets through into Newgrounds sometimes, and it has a good story behind it. Maybe some voice and some text could help, but for the most part, this was effective and was executed nicely. Well done.
WOW!!!!!!!!
are you a hippy?
I liked the idea, just work on some things
I actually liked this flash a lot. The only thing is it had some problems. A couple parts in the movie moved really slow and took too long, such as the Intro, and the part when the flower is flying over the clouds. You need to Work on drawing in perspective a little more, and just try to improve your drawing altogether because I felt this flash would have been great if the graphics were better in some parts.
That's all I could really tell you, It was a nice idea and I did like it. I loved the cloud transision part when the flower starts to fly higher. I even voted a 5 to keep the score up in case it was low.
Good work and please improve on your drawing skills! Do that and I will eagerly await your next movie.
very nice try
hey assuming that was your first flash that was awesome!!! but uhhh... just a few things you must do to keep the audience engaged... like humor or something, because i found that the animation was dragging on and like the flower was flying for what seemed like forever! also your shooting star occured inside the house as the flower fell asleep (problems with layers?? i know mine get messy too, dont worry too much!). your music looped and when i thought it was finished and it started over whilst the flower was flying in the clouds my eyelids get extra heavy! anyways, shorten that scene where he flies in the clouds and play around with flash abit more and practice, practice, practice! also want to note that you had some good tweens in there... keep it up! good work lad