Much better!
The only thing is that there are many melodies going on at once, and they are hitting notes that are half or whole steps away from each other, which sounds really bad...so try to stick to one melody at a time...
But nice sounds and GREAT work!!
Keep it up!
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thanks for review :p
where exactly do you mean that it sounds bad because there are going on more then one melody at that time ?
let me know please ^^
i try to get it better then haha :p
glad you like it anyway ;)
i did check already some things out from you, but didn't had time to review :p
i'll today or tomorrow ^^
Hm...
I never heard the original, so i can't really compare... but it isn't at all repetitive, which is a nice change from most techno... the beats pretty good, but it's not AMAZING, you know? I don't throw around my ratings so ten's for absolutely awesome, but this is a definite download ;)
thanks dude! i don't expect a 10 :p
if you want to give 10, then you give a 10, 9 .. then you give 9 lol :p
just need to explain a bit :D
thanks for dl!
sweet you made it!
i knew you could make it.
nice remix
haha thanks for support :D
Great song!
Very good song, chill on the snare a bit... or turn it down some. It drowns out stuff at certain points.
ok i'll see what i can do ;)
Alright
Alright its was pretty good I must say. Although the length was a bit short and maybe I don't know it seemed like it was missing a certain beet or something. Don't get me wrong the beet you had was fine though.
ye about the lenght, i know, i was bit out of inspiration at end part haha :p
but im going to remake the whole end part ( not the piano ) and make it longer and bring in all the advice i like to try :)