Nice
Hey that wasn't bad at all. Good Work
Reviews for "The Corporates 1"
Good punchline
I liked it, good as far as most second submissions go! You need to find a style that sets your backgrounds and characters apart, something to make the faces more gritty, textured....but that comes with time and practice. I like the humour, but maybe focuses too much on each specific incident. corporate water cooler talk is more snippity, like two women talking shit to eachother but with much more subtlety! Great punchline though!
HEy
Its been done before
fuckin terrible
i hope your soul burns. You wasted time and effort in this shit. I really would enjoy to see you die. Your movie is a cancer and it should be destroyed. I hope that you feel crushed, and that all the time you wasted on this video that you could be getting laid or something. Scrap that your a fag, nevermind.