This is a keeper!
The dull graphics were perfect when it came to displaying the dull office environment. Voices were well done and the voice acting was alright.
Gotta love poking fun at corporations!
Reviews for "The Corporates 1"
Not too bad...
You should try making this into a series. There is potential there. Not too sure, if it will command a bigger fanbase though.
Nice
Hey that wasn't bad at all. Good Work
Daaammmmmnnnn
Man, you are of to a gooood start with cartoons.
Most of the 'toons I see that are made by authors just starting out are easy blam points, but this is prime!
If this doesn't get on the front page tomorrow, I bet your next flash will!
Good punchline
I liked it, good as far as most second submissions go! You need to find a style that sets your backgrounds and characters apart, something to make the faces more gritty, textured....but that comes with time and practice. I like the humour, but maybe focuses too much on each specific incident. corporate water cooler talk is more snippity, like two women talking shit to eachother but with much more subtlety! Great punchline though!