i didn't get it
umm....What? I'm sorry. It was awesome. I still give it a 5. But I just don't get it. Are you sure that there is nothing before this? but still, great animation. The voices were good to. Just a little quiet. Wait a sec...Never mind. That's just my speakers. But still, great awesome stuff! VOTE 5 OR ELSE!
Great
I loved the thing from start to finish. And don't worry about people saying it was "too short", they just need something to whine about.
There was one minor problem and that was the sound you used for the footsteps. They were extremely loud in the beginning, which I managed to look over in the hopes that you purposely did that...but what really bugged me was the fact that you only had one sound for it. This created some problems: first, there was no distinction between the two people walking...or even a difference on a step-to-step basis and that monotony was really distracting; and second, you should have used a different sound for the concrete roof than you did for the metal stairs, it was really awkward hearing those bassy steps when I was expecting a high-pitched, tinny sound...and again, each step would've made a different sound.
Well, there's your mini-lecture on footstep sounds. You can easily make a few by taking high heels and knocking them down on a nice piece of wood.
good, but has room for improvements
ok, first of: voice acting was pretty bad. fix that, and you fix most of your sound problems. make it a little louder too. next: smooth out the animations. some of them were kinda clunky. nice work otherwise. could stand to be a little longer though.
What? That's it!!!
I can believe you call that a flash. Animation was creepy, sound was ok, graphics...well one gives you points for originality, story seemed good, but that's way too short. Work on that man.
Huh?
Erm... okay. Nice graphics and attempt at animation. Try using flash a bit more rather than drawing everything, leaves a nicer effect. A bit longer next time as well that was too short and it wasn't clear exactly what was going on, so try and make your flashs a bit longer and actual explain a bit more.