Climax?
I think I'll use a metaphor for this song. This song was like someone telling a story that never really had a climax. Like at 1:15 I expected to get blown away by some heavier louder synth and bass, but I didn't. Now don't get me wrong this song is completely amazing, and you get a 9 from me and a download. I really liked 1:40 where you threw in a little bit of hip hop. Great song! Goodluck on future songs!
Well...
Right on man,the melody is great,the bass line is astuning.
some things i think you should correct:
1. the transfer bettwen the melodys at 01:13 should have been diffrent,i feel like those are 4 seconds lost for nothin,you should have made the pause a little longer,and make a background melo or bass or something to cover for it.
Anyway, hope this helps.
HiddenWalrus,Out!
Nice remix!
Iwasent really enjoy that intro, beacuse its sounded abit wierd to me. Then u used really nice highquality drum n bass kicks,, and sort of the bell got out of tune some to. Then main Kick come in iwasent really same clear as the drum n bass sample kick was abit muddy. Could need some EQ or maybe turn voylme down the beat sample kick, Its not really fit to ur Main kick. Was nice idea on that intro play at 1.12 was more your own creativity, Then it come back to classic Dj mangoo Euro gate synth witch is ok but way to standard. Synth it self wasent that powerful either ithink its got abit messy for my taste, Hard kick and bass, with poor euro synth dosent match. Anyway end whistle was fine actully. / TN
:) good to hear some criticism..i like it. you gotta work with me though i mean this is my first remix and i tried to make it my own creation but not take out the original beat you know? but i will work harder on my EQ. thnx for the review:)
Definatley Top-5 Material
It might not make it there, though. I've been really disapointed lately with the amount of crap that makes the top 5.
The problem i find with this song, is it idles out and gets dull too much. I liked the opening melody, but then it just degrades. Its not even that good when it repeats.
But i liked the heart of the melody and the spirit. I think you might have the basis for something here.
haha well how does it degrade? its got breakbeats. Honestly i couldnt add anymore to it with out overdoing it. I would love to hear some suggestions though to make my music better. :) Thanks for the review -757irish
Well,
This song is definitely catchy, but not because of the composition. Obviously, you can't be penalized for that, but you can be penalized for choosing this song. No, the reason this is so good is because of the percussion. The really hardcore drum 'n' bass loops really got me into this song. Some of the bass synths are also really rich, and I like it.