Hmmmmmm....
I like the story line (to a degree) but there were just things that I picked up that could be a tad better. First off is the spelling; faild = failEd, eny = Any etc, might wanna check it out before finishing the project. Secondly was the background, the fires looked too smooth, and you could've replaced the grey background with red for "Hell".
I thought you could've had more emphesis on the Devil, i mean he's supposed to be the very essence of evil, and you kinda introduced him like "this is the devil...be afraid", and his guards were a bit wank if you dont mind me saying hehe.
There is some real potential here dude, you could improve it quite well, and one more thing...slow down the speed of the texts, cant quite finish readin 'em! :)