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Reviews for "A Story about kirby"

Nice

I thought that it was pretty good, I just wish that there was some more sound.

Nice Start...

You were a little rough around the edges with the storyline, but it was good enough. I liked the advertising for the Orcarina of Time. :)

You need more sound for the movie though and proper spelling would've been nice; m-w . com would have helped with that. (Appearantly it doesn't like urls, so forgive the spaces, but that site really could help you.)

You had nice sprites though and don't fret about your drawing ability, practice will make it better.

hmmmm...

i seem to remember mr. woody as being a bit...smaller. plus he has a secound stage. kinda funny but some of the graffics are pretty bad. lit with the cloud guy (he's much harder by the way) was in a white box.

((( CUTE )))

It was cute, i like the way you have him fight apples that was really funny hehe, i also like the way you have the music in this, and how it goes with the animation, but it could have used some sound effect, it was still ok though. The sprites were animated really well, but the text looked to plain, maybe next time you could add more to the text, but it's a ok job so far...

~X~

Not really anything good...

I don't know if this was random practice for you or what, but the dialogue needs work, the reference to Zelda wasn't funny at all. The second battle should be redone to make sense. Sorry.