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Reviews for "A Story about kirby"

((( CUTE )))

It was cute, i like the way you have him fight apples that was really funny hehe, i also like the way you have the music in this, and how it goes with the animation, but it could have used some sound effect, it was still ok though. The sprites were animated really well, but the text looked to plain, maybe next time you could add more to the text, but it's a ok job so far...

~X~

it was pretty good

a little slow, but good, the speed is alll uneed 2 work on, besides that, iot was good, i also wish youd make it longer or make a pt 2 or sumtin...
nice work tho!

great except...

The animation was kinda slow... The explosions, the apple part..

If it was faster like say 2 or 4 times, it would've been an awsome fast paced flash... but nontheless good job!

Nice Start...

You were a little rough around the edges with the storyline, but it was good enough. I liked the advertising for the Orcarina of Time. :)

You need more sound for the movie though and proper spelling would've been nice; m-w . com would have helped with that. (Appearantly it doesn't like urls, so forgive the spaces, but that site really could help you.)

You had nice sprites though and don't fret about your drawing ability, practice will make it better.

Very good.

I love sprite movies and I liked this one. You need to add more violence, humor, sound and maybe SOME interactivity if you want to! Well done!