BlazePyron has a good point...
+ = :D
- = hmm, look into it.
+Slower, legato, flowing section was amazing. Loved it :)
+Mixing was astounding.
-The more intense section was too staccato, shortened. I think that style makes for a GREAT transition sound, but make the melodic approach for the "chorus", persay, more flowing. Maybe instead of a gated feel, go for connected pulses. Connected, but still a trailing off of the notes of the melody. The piece loses its beauty otherwise.
***Wow though, this is a great piece. Nice remix idea. I like when people remix the songs you don't even think about :)
-ImperfectDisciple