Really Good! But... could use some improvement
You've got the concept down perfectly. I used to love these kinds of books, but I could never find them... Anyways, as I was saying...Your graphics really need improvement, but they're a really good start. To make it more interesting, you should branch off to other girls, too... maybe even a guy or two. Some of the dead ends should be negotiable too, as in, you take one wrong turn but you can make another right turn to get back on track. This game was REALLY fun!