its entertainment
if u keep making these, u might get urself a spot on NG just for these. u needa work on ur graphics tho.
Reviews for "reH Park (Sin City spoof)"
((( HAHA )))
Oh man that was funny, i like the way you have made fun of Sin City. The animations were simple, the way you also made it with south park like characters for your joke was interesting. The sounds, and voices were really good in this. The story was funny, and i laughed a lot watching this...
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strange
that was... interesting to say the least.
There's potential...
Biggest issue, if you're going to make your character style in tribute to another style, give it your own spin. The main character was almost a trace-over of Stan made black and white. My own characters were originally (like five years ago) inspired by Toad, but I've given them my own spin, proportioning, and style. Take the characters you're using and make them YOUR's, not just copies of South Park characters (unless you're doing a South Park spoof).
You're a decent voice-actor, I've gotta give you that. Just work on character design a little bit, and maybe a more polished end credits scene (where you had the replay button). Organize the text a little, and make a clearer Replay button. Remember, that's the most recent thing a viewer sees after your movie's over.
That Was Kinda Gross...
Yeah, big Sin City fan but that was gay...literally. I don't like watching gay sex... especially when another dude talks about another dude's...ughhhhhhhhhhh... "Nice nipples." Yeah... just a little on the gross side.