Learn More Than Simple Tweens
Your art wasn't good, it appears as though you either traced, or just imported pictures. Plus, all it was was the simplest of motion tweens, I mean, all they did was slide across the ground.
You're off to a good start, but you seriously need to do some practice.
That Was Kinda Gross...
Yeah, big Sin City fan but that was gay...literally. I don't like watching gay sex... especially when another dude talks about another dude's...ughhhhhhhhhhh... "Nice nipples." Yeah... just a little on the gross side.
((( HAHA )))
Oh man that was funny, i like the way you have made fun of Sin City. The animations were simple, the way you also made it with south park like characters for your joke was interesting. The sounds, and voices were really good in this. The story was funny, and i laughed a lot watching this...
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Blasé
First off, anyone who has a problem with homosexuals can fuck off. Castrate all bigots for the good of the species.
But that aside, the cartoon wasn't very good. With a lot of work it might turn into something, but there simply isn't anything worthwhile there yet. Keep trying!
2/5
Sound sucked something awful! CHange the sound...please!