Has a way to go...
This was a decent teaser for The Saga, but didnt display anything more than pictures and text. It would have been much better to include at least SOME animation to show the art style and such.
Also, that song was horrible. It would be better to cut out the vocal part as it sounds pathetic.. and makes reading harder. I know you were trying to add that touch of evil to it to make it sounds scarier and such... but I feel that it takes away from it.
Thats my 2 cents.