Reminiscent of early Emily Dickenson
Ok, maybe not, but good nonetheless. Perhaps we'll get to hear more of your musings.
Reviews for "Wall Lunch"
just the way it was said was funny!!!!
we eat our lunch along the wall. we hopes t ogod we dosn't fall.
but all in all, if thats our fate we happy bout this food we ate
the food we ate, though it was nice was cwunchy-wunchy just like ice
cause it was ice, we wasnt suprised
we fell off the wall and met our demise...damn good poem!!!! the mest one i have ever herd, once again keep of this good work
great job
haha wow that poem was awesome man ....funny stuff...the voice reading made it so much better too. The art work demonstrated good drawing skills and the poem demonstrated good entertaining skills. good job and im definitly looking forward to more of these wacky poems.
distrubing yet...
distrubing yet beautiful well done!
That's awsome enough to pay for
Has anyone ever considered a Newgrounds Film Festival?