Wow- that was tacky.
All right. I know You've done multiple others before this, so I won't even mention the fact that I had NO IDEA what the hell was going on, seeing as I haven't seen any before this. I won't blast you on that. Other than that, the voice acting was simply horrendous. I simply cannot abide a story line- even if it is good (which it wasn't)- If the cheesy characters with their cheesy scripts and bad acting continually ruin it.
Even with all that aside, what this all boils down to is a tacky love-gone-bad story that would make a decent platformer, due to the "powerful orbs" that I guess he has to collect. It was good animation though. Sorry, but I can't give this one too good a score. Maybe in the next installment try some variation of voice actors, or maybe... acting to begin with? You have a very good animation style though- try again with something else, and i'm sure you'll succeed.