Long, Nice - but something is missing
First, I must admit, that this is the only episode of EgoCity, I have seen.
Here's my thoughts:
-- Bad --
Too many cutscenes and too many characters (very confusing).
Some voiceacting (worst at the 'screaming' part, where it more sounded like.
Incorrect soundeffects ("weren't that supposed to be a WOOSH and not a SMACK?").
Some graphics and animations did not quite fit into the movie...
++ Good ++
The length of the movie.
I kinda liked the story.
The music were perfect, and some of the soundeffects (beside the battlesounds) were also lifting climax.
The environment. Sometimes you could live yourself into the city.
[[ Overall ]]
Even though, you've put great effort and time into making this movie, the movie itself still leaks something. For example; It does need some connection. I got confused will all the different scenes switching faster than humping rabbits. Cut down in the ammout of scenechanges, and give the characters a little more personality, than just being there, saying stuff or, eventually, just blowing things up.
Beside all of this, it was easy to acknowledge, that the movie had a spirit. As said previously, the music played a big role. Once, it maked me shiver, because of the great timing - eg. when the maincharacter turned evil.
[[ Final Thoughts ]]
You got the spirit all right. Just live yourself more into your work, and offer it the time it takes. Don't jump over where the fence is lowest (don't cut corners) - but you know that ;)
" I LIKED IT ! "