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What was that? it was a bit cool, the drawing at all.. but the plot seems a tad unexistent... lol why did the guy with the dual SMGS looks so much like pico??
Reviews for "-HitmaN Part 1-"
Nairo responds:
I know the guy looked a bit like pico, I didn't ment to draw him this way, but I did...
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it's not bad, but i realy got bored watching it.. you should work on your suspence. Change music, get rid of some scene's.. just make it shorter and better. I think still too many people on newgrounds automaticaly vote high if a movie takes longer than 2 minutes, and if the graphics and the sound is good.. But hey, i still believe a movie should tell a story. And this one did.. but you could have told the story a lot faster, whit the same music, and no-one would get bored. Just a tip
Nairo responds:
thanks for the tip.:)
Hmm not bad buuut
Ok a lot of people have said that one should have the butt in the same shoulder as the trigger arm... But before I move onto that I want to mention that a Dragunov isn't accurate enough to hit a target through the head from that distance not to mention that the bullet would lose velocity and the angle of impact would change according to the Sniper's position. Next is the fact that on impact if one makes contact with what I assume was the Hypothalumus they remain standing for a few seconds then they die due to the rapid breakup of brain tissue. Next issue is the trigger finger... This really depends on what style the sniper prefers... In other words in such a situation the sniper would prefer to remain unseen and judging by the fact he fired with his left it was either intentional or unintentional due to concealment issues, far easier to notice someone holding the gun naturally... Just aesthetics really. Otherwise the music could have had more emphasis I just thought it was a bit bland and quiet perhaps increasing the quality of the sound perhaps, by measures such as choosing a track with better ranges of notes. The 'Grouping' on the Tecs was far too close even at fity yards the grouping disperses and accuracy drops, ideal range is 20 yards and up close where if one had a choice a shotgun would be ideal, on a further note of that on instinct he wouldn't know where the sniper is and would find cover and try to lure the sniper because of one fact, the sniper knows where he is and could kill him in one shot. Try playing sniper games or watching Enemy at the Gates before invovling snipers...
Nairo responds:
Well,.... I guess you're right... :s
Ok...
Try fixing your buttons before dropping it online..
Nairo responds:
The buttons work...!!
OMFG that was one of the most boring flashes EVER!
man, you're wasted...
great graphic and great animation... you are realy talented...
but sooooooo boring...