Alright.
The story was pretty cliche, but the whole "choose your own adventure" thing was neat. It's been done before, but that's because it works and it's fun. Good choice for the music. Just work on your graphics and animation - you've got a good start on your Flash career.
'Where the hell where you?'
Pretty good stuff. I dunno tho'... I'll have to see how it develops.
The starting text made me expect a more serious movie, almost in the tone of of Mind and Machine or something.
Well, the 'movie' was definitely interactive (I'd call it a game...) and the whole thing was reasonably made.
It was basically just the unexceptional plot that let it down.
Oh... and the spelling mistake also annoyed me.
music
lol you used Rob D's music from the matrix....why don't all you people just go and make your own music? I'm a techno Dj, you guys should just atleast go buy fruit loops 3 or somthing if you just want software to do it.
Thats Bull
That can't be your first flash! its too good!
It is... I messed around with flash for quite a while before making a full-fledged movie.
Very Nice
I really liked the plot and the animation does need work. You should get rid of the sentinals it is tii Matrixy. And the too quick for the eye thing, that has been done 1,000 times! but it is a good start!