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The story in the begining had me thinking it would be interesting, but then once it started... The names were stupid, you should've thought them through. Kombat Machine? C'mon... And the music just stopped, and a new song started. No sound effects. Just constructive criticism.
it's alright!
Overall it wasn't that bad. The music at the start made the movie sound quite proffesional and the writing made the story quite interesting (if not a little unoriginal) but when the first graphic was shown I became a little dissapointed and lost interest! Though the choice of paths was quite good! It had potential but the graphics and animation was bad and ruined it!
fuck you
get your own fucking ideas moron. To think you would dare take anything out of dragon ball z. And that music clubbed to death by rob d has been way over used for flash movies. And if you didnt notice that song is outta The Matrix which is also a straight rip off. Fuck you. You have no talent. YOU LOSER...
not my own ideas? NOT MY OWN IDEAS???!!! Where the hell do you get dbz in this thing? Aside from Kombat Machine's hair, he's almost nothing like dbz, he doesn't fly and shoot energy, he just jumps and wields an axe. And just because I used music from the Matrix doesn't neccessarily mean that I'm ripping off it, I WOULD be ripping off if one of my characters fell backwards in slow-motion to dodge bullets. Besides, this is my first flash, in case you didn't bother to read my comments.
Pretty Kool
I like this kinda stuff. And I'm not adveritising for my game or anything, but if you like this, you may like a game I made called: Atlantis. Type it in on the search engine if ur interested. And uhhh... Clik on Atlantis (fixed). But anyway, ur game was really good, the charcters could have been drawn better, but I understand ur new at this... so good job man. I'll make sure to chek out the sequal.
Pointers
I loved the intro, the music was perfect and the story was well put foward. Once into the actual game, things went downhill a bit. First off, I think you're trying to mix themes. You tried to have a fairly serious story, but threw some odd humor in there. (At least this is my perception) Names like "Mortal Enemy" and "Guy", pffffttt. Stick to one theme, in this case, action. The movie would be much better that way. Secondly, the animation is a bit weak. Not to say it's bad, but it could use some work. Have the character look a bit less cartoonish and actually walk. (As opposed to sliding accross the screen) I did love the glint on the weapons in the first scene, that was cool. Thirdly, DIALAUGE! (Or however the hell you spell it) Some of those lines were just cheesy. Please, make the dialauge a bit more mature. That was the biggest weakness that I could see. Fourthly, I loved the interactivity! That was very unigue and well done! The choices were well thought out and had a action/reaction thing going. Overall, good attempt! I hope to see a sequel.