Reviews for battle royal part 1/2

[D3vilsheep]

Ok well...

Being a HUGE fan of Battle Royale myself, you should at LEAST read the book as well to help with this so-called tribute. I mean wtf, Takeshi Kitano (my favorite Japanese director) isn't even called Takeshi in the movie, and he isn't anywhere in the novel. The attempt was good, but you are not knowledgable enough to create a good Flash re-imagination. You could have at least used songs from the soundtrack, which I can glady give you. Good idea with the class roster check-off...the only thing I found creative at all.

Tendo was shot in the neck anyways...unless you wanted that to be your own style.

Ok ok, so it was a tribute to the MOVIE...but it was OFF. Way off. But look at the bright side; you may have inspired me to create a Battle Royale tribute with the "TRIBUTE" aspect more emphasized. Nice art, they're not Japanese (from what I can SEE) but good art anyways. Lastly, at least spell the title right if you want people to take you seriously. Glad to see another Battle Royale fan though.

[RainbowFreedom]

it all in asia speak

i dident comprehend what was going on, so i cant reall y rate it, so whatevewr, very violent

[Ironhorn]

That was... what exactly?

Sorry but if this is the first part I'm not looking forward to the second. There was nothing, no story or anything. I don't even know if that girl on the news was in the battle royal you showed. It's just... there is nothing.

Good Graphics though, just needs a story line. During the BR movie I felt bad because they were killing thier friends. But this I was just... sickend by how hard that guy could throw a bolt

[BassMasterFei]

Puerile.

Look, if you don't know enough Japanese to string together real dialogue, that's fine. No one's going to yell at you for putting together a tribute in English. What isn't fine is slapping random voice clips of the seiyuu from the Hunter x Hunter OVA onto your movie, especially since they have nothing to do with what's really going on onscreen. Maybe only a few people on Newgrounds will notice the difference, but it's remarkable bad form. If you love a Japanese movie enough to make a tribute to it, then you should at least dredge up the effort to find yourself mildly accurate voice acting.

[johnny1039]

can be a little better

yeah u need to read more of the manga if u havent cause some of the stuff i didnt like also make the drawlings better